Yeah, the writing style looks very much like Cap'n Bob on his best but 'in disguise' behavior. We'll see but I think you overplayed the 'what's KiPass' shtick. 

Brian

Blue is a nice color depending on the shade. I've seen some really nice blues over the years. Come to think of it, my eyes are blue.
 What is this Kipass that you speak of?

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Yeah, the writing style looks very much like Cap'n Bob on his best but 'in disguise' behavior. We'll see but I think you overplayed the 'what's KiPass' shtick. 

Brian